Friday, 24 July 2020

The day I traded my T.V for a big fat rabbit !!! by Aurel

The day I traded my T.V for a big fat rabbit WALT-write an entertain your audience. Hook-start with middle/end.

 “WHY DID YOU DO THAT” “NOW I CAN’T WATCH MY FAVORITE T.V SHOWS GO GET OUR T.V BACK THIS INSTANT!” my mum screamed in complete horror. “WHAT DID YOU EVEN TRADE THE T.V FOR?” my mum questioned in dismay. “I-I traded it for a cute gigantic bunny” I answered timidly

 Well that’s what all the chaos was about but let me tell you from the beginning when my sister asked me “Why am I so short?” “Because you are little” I answered. “Why do you get to be so tall” “Because I am smarter dummy and older” I ran inside and grabbed some ice cubes(I brought the ice cubes hoping my sister would soon stop talking). Then I put the ice cube in her T-shirt and laughed when she started running around in circles hoping the ice cubes would eventually come out. Then quite suddenly the doorbell rang . I ran to the door and opened it excitedly. There I saw my friend Emily standing with a blue cage and I saw there was a cute little bunny(I wouldn’t say little bunny, to be honest, I would say gigantic bunny). She said that her dad had bought it for her so she wouldn’t be so alone. I asked her why did she feel alone though she replied “Because my 35 sisters never bother to play with me so my dad thought that he should buy me a bunny to play with” “That’s a cool rabbit,” I said.

I thought for a moment and said that would she like my dad’s car for the bunny because I really wanted that adorable rabbit “No something else” she replied. I showed her everything I even agreed to give her the house. Then I saw the T.V “Hey, Emily do you wanna T.V” “hmm...Sure may I see it” “Yeah it’s there my mum bought a theatre sized one” “Sure I’ll take it” She left after the moving truck had come. Then out of the blue, my mum came in the room and questioned “Girls why was a moving truck here and why did it have the same T.V that we have” I rushed downstairs petrified I thought I could outrun mum for a few days and stay at grandmas but my mum seized my shirt and said where was the T.V I replied timorously to mums question “I-I-I TRADED IT” “YOU WHAT” “I traded it…” “WHY DID YOU DO THAT” “NOW I CAN’T WATCH MY FAVORITE T.V SHOWS GO GET OUR T.V BACK THIS INSTANT!” my mum screamed in complete horror. “WHAT DID YOU EVEN TRADE THE T.V FOR?” my mum questioned in dismay. “I-I traded it for a cute gigantic bunny” I answered timidly “GO GET IT BACK NOW!!!” “Ok m-mom” “Karry go with your older sister,” my mum said a little more calmly “WHY ME” my sister cried “KARRY GO WITH KAYA I WILL NOT REPEAT MYSELF” my mum screamed.

Me and Karry escaped the exploding volcano(our mum) and ran to Emily’s house. I knocked on Emily’s door to find out that she had traded the T.V for a donkey. She handed me the donkey and told me to go to Cherry's house. After a few minutes which felt like hours, we arrived at Cherry's house. It was a very neat house, it had a pale blue roof and bright white walls. I rang the doorbell while Karry stared at the tiger that was locked in the cage. Cherry came outside and said “Why are you here” “Can we have our T.V” “S…” To be continued... Part 2 coming

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