My weekend

Aurel

I woke up to the sound of the birds chirping outside I woke my mum up I woke my sister up then my sister said “uhhh’’ let us sleep I said “NO’’we have to go to hot waves beach,train,zoo!So wake up or else you we will not be able to reach in time.Aurel,Aurel,Aurel it’s like 5:00 IN THE MORNING! “Sorry” sis “ok’’ wait till it is “ummm”... 6:30 “AUREL’’! Be quiet and let me think ”ummm’’...8:00.’’Fine” good now go to bed and let me sleep.(At 8:00)Ring Ring Ring the alarm clock went and woke up took a bath, brushed my teeth,wore my clothes and ran downstairs  Mum,mum,mum!I shouted it is 9:00 we are going to be late.Stop panicking or else we will be late oh fine I said and my mum said oh and by the way stay optimistic! Ok I said.After a while of total chaos my mum said let’s go we went in the car.After a while we had finally arrived.

I like how you used nice punctuation like exclamation marks and speech marks good work.